As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways.
What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are thechanges that take place good?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
When grown up, children become adults and more mature. We find life less aethestic as when we were young, we start to consciously think about the world and become more and more realistic.
As we were small, the world around us is full of mystery and beautiful. We dreamt of whom to become, of places to go, of the relationships we are about to make. However, after experience some of those dreams, we would find out that it is extremely hard to become someone, to achieve something. To someone who suffered tremendous failures, lovely imagination would disappear forever.
Through suffering, we perceive the limit of each’s abilities. Some decide to live with it, some decide to change in order to reach their dreams. No matter what choice ones make, those rational considerations mark one steps elevated from a child’s though to an adult’s cogitation. We are more thoughtful in which, besides imagine about our dreamland we seriously scrutinize about whether to create it ourselves or to live with in the real bitter world.
Consequently, some elderlies stucked themselves in countless collapses and lost hope for improvement, they decided to live day-by-day in a place they were not belong to and in the jobs they did not deserve. These people have developed the negative behaviors toward society.
From my point of view, the extent in which positive swings in social conducting from children to adults is pretty substantial. Obviously, it is some exceptions in which elderlies refuses to grow up, or decline to optimistic changes. They need to overcome by themselves, as to enjoy the best life ever.
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- As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways.What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are thechanges that take place good?Give reasons for your answer and includ 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...ive day-by-day in a place they were not belong to and in the jobs they did not deserve...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11235955056 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83864494903 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625468164794 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5938962763 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138920246268 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430815898407 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454890859944 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708058532927 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291438046917 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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