Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. Why are children doing this and how serious are the consequences?
In this day and age, an increasing number of off-spring tends to consume youth-food compared to traditional snacks. In fact, it is undeniable that take-away provide both pros and cons thus this essay will clarify the reason why they eating this and severe issue.
On the one hand, it is evident that five minute preparation of burgers or pizza provides acts as a catalyst for saving time when they have a wealth of homework or other things which could be finished. Furthermore, fried foods are affordable which they just pay a bit of money; especially the middle-class students who don’t have enough money to eat at fine-dining restaurant. Moreover, a quick snacks does not have a wide range of choices, there by the pre-adults could mix custom choice about food items such as a burger pairs with soft drink if they want. For example, a vast number of articles reported that the majority of undergraduate ignore home-cooked on the account that it is quite waste time to buy ingredient at a grocery store and could not chat with their friends.
On the other hand, food preservatives and coloring generate fatal disease such as cognitive malfunction, weakened own immune system and so forth if there is an excessive consumption in the long-term. Another alarming dilemma should be taken into account is a multitude of children intakes a huge calories from sandwiches, fries and so forth on the ground that contains high-fat, high-sugar so which make they would cope with the risk of obesity in the future if they do not reduce frequency. For example, newspapers revealed that the percentage of the overweight teens is thus a growing trend in the USA.
In conclusion, the pros and cons of high-calories food eventually counterbalances hence it depends on the amount of eating. Personally, I think that they should have a balanced diet to keep fit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96474358974 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83012457531 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8935164597 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.818181818 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110085949366 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371737641667 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387144785836 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673928203774 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507543245958 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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