Children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe children should be free to do what they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Children should do arrange action in their free time. While others believe children should be acquit to do what they want. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before a reasoned is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of children should do organized activities in free time. First, time is believed to be a rare resource. So, children need to develop clear and organized work habits from work or free time. This arrange activities support, presumably, tends not only control the time but also control your learning m. Second, will help you see how effective time management can be. Working on a schedule will help you when you should take a break and what to do in your free time. In fact, it is acknowledged the easiest way for kids to study and not lazy because kids have to follow the schedule.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once children should to do organized activities. First, children to have follow schedule because that is organized activities. So, children not comfortable and not free in their free time. Children feel not relaxing and happy because in their free time they want to be a free to do what they want, this helps children develop character and develop better. Second, children should play sport or playing game rather than following a schedule like a robot. Children should be properly developed, not bound by timelines. It,instead, would be a more organized activities option if children know how to use it properly.
I was discussed both views. In my opinion, children should do they want in free time. Everyone are all time. In the future, I hope children will be more comfortable with their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d do arrange action in their free time. While others believe children should be acqui...
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Message: Did you mean 'acquitted'?
Suggestion: acquitted
...While others believe children should be acquit to do what they want. This essay will e...
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...amine both sides of the argument before a reasoned is drawn. Admittedly, there are some a...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...zed activities. First, children to have follow schedule because that is organized acti...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , instead
...ly developed, not bound by timelines. It,instead, would be a more organized activities o...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...uld do they want in free time. Everyone are all time. In the future, I hope childre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, while, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89726027397 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58258236209 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9455346066 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0952380952 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9047619048 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.643408767837 0.244688304435 263% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211200375501 0.084324248473 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16753471651 0.0667982634062 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.457816232058 0.151304729494 303% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747480869961 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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