TV which is one of the most common thing we see in each and every home now a days. It is the greatest achievement and at the same time kids are spending most of the time on the TV. The problems caused by watching television too much is explained in this essay.
The two main causes of seeing TV for more period of time are damaging the eye sight and also results in downfall of academics of the children. Watching TV for considerable time causes eye related problems, as the rays that TV produce are not good for eyes for a long term. For instance we can see that many children are using spectacles they are consequence of watching more television. Filling the massive amount of time on entertainment causes adverse effects on the educational works. For example child should utilize some of their time for doing homework and reading but when it is filled with TV then there is no time for academics. Thus, TV can root to eye problems and negative impact on studies.
Some possible solutions to overcome situations are limiting the amount of time using on television and giving time for kids from our busy life. By limiting the time they utilize on television can possibly reduce the problems related to vision. Children are addicted to watch TV because we are not caring to spend some quality time with them so if we care to use some of our leisure period by talking and encouraging kids to do the homework can create a lot of positive impact in this problematic situation.
To conclude, using more time on TV can cause visionary diseases and downgrade of academics. However, limiting the entertainment time and spending some fun time with kids is the ultimate solution to this problem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...thing we see in each and every home now a days. It is the greatest achievement and at ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... time kids are spending most of the time on the TV. The problems caused by watchi...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...or more period of time are damaging the eye sight and also results in downfall of academi...
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Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...ing the time they utilize on television can possibly reduce the problems related to vision. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66889632107 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56800004307 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501672240803 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6452088666 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335846063037 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129625134024 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620889261179 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23173063155 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422256529699 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.