In this modern times, there is no doubt that technology's developments are leading to scores of problems. It is teenagers who rely on it are advised to play sports and take part in traditional activities rather than spend indoor all day. From my perspective, I completely agree with that view for several reasons.
First and foremost, there is no denying that open-air activities have positive impacts on the mental and physical development pf children. In consequence of sitting in front of screens for hours, they are likely to lack of movement and a myriad of health problems such as obesity, overworking eyes...It has been proven that engaging in outdoor activities, students' physical health strengthens and they can detach from stress.
Last but not least, it seems obvious that outdoor activities offer children a chance to broaden their knowledge. Children can gain a certain amount of knowledge about life as they cut back on time wasted on electronic entertainment. Simultaneously, infants are in a position to develop their social skills and reach their full potential. Additionally, traditional activities are ignored as a result of a rapid development of technology. Hence, youngers should join those activities in order to preserve traditional past times.
In a nutshell, with the advancement of technology, children get easy access to electronic devices and get addicted to them. However, for their overall development, they should get involved in outdoor activities as it will help them to have a good health and gain practical knowledge.
- Children today are to dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional past times than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with the statement Wri 56
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people think that boys and girls should be educated in the same schools Others however believe that girls achieves better results when educated in single sex school Discuss both these views and give your oipnion 89
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree 78
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ems such as obesity, overworking eyes...It has been proven that engaging in outdoo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0230419783 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2634884238 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.416666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165666569643 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060424546063 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724004142355 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103097870493 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749914302393 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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