Children who are brouht up in families that do not have large amouts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Children from the disadvantaged background are considered by some to be more experienced for adult life rather than those from wealthy families. In my opinion, the former are mentally strong and also they tend to work at different jops with low salary from a young age.
To begin, children who are brought up in poor families can hardly be influenced by negative situations, while those from wealthy backgroundcan be more aggressive if they fail to achieve what they wish. The poor usually fights for the goal despite the young age. the main cause for this is that their parents who sweat and save money are the role models for them. For instance they study hard at school even if they cannot afford to attend a costly tutorial.
Furtermore the majority of children support their parents by earning money. Because of their age the only jobs they can work for are waiters or cleaners who earn insufficient amount of money. Nevertheless this helps them to gain experience in a particular sphere and finding a job for them can be relatively easy. For example many celebrities from families with small earnings worked in various low-paid professions before becoming successful.
By way of conclusion although these children are not grown in wealthy conditions the can achieve much as they are ready for failures in life and they also have enough work experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
... who earn insufficient amount of money. Nevertheless this helps them to gain experience in a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94759825328 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61051380514 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61135371179 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4454535238 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158857258064 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642150491243 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571042341945 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101226720375 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140432369935 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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