Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages
In recent year, education fee is a hot controversial debate and some nations already provide free of tuition fee for their residents. Although this policy brings certain drawbacks, I believe that the benefits are much greater.
On the one hand, it can be said that no education cost may be created a burden on the national budget. It is true that governments have to pour a huge amount of money into the education field, resulting in they may be insufficient funding for other sections such as infrastructure and health care. Hence, to avoid this issue, people in those countries should pay more tax. This may mean that those people who live alone and do not have any children may feel unfair about this education policy, so they think that they are not responsible to pay their money for others.
By contrast, there are various benefits of free of tuition fee. First and foremost, when people are encouraged to study, the illiteracy rate in a country will be reduced. As a result, they may have numerous chances to find good jobs and become the main workforce in their country. Singapore is an example. The government sponsors education fee for young generation which is encouraged to go to schools or universities. That is a reason why this nation has the number of qualified manpower contributing to their economic development. Moreover, with financial support from the government, many families do not worry about their finance which is used for their children’s high education fee. As a consequence, those families budget may spend for other purposes such as living cost or insurance which may improve their health and lifestyles.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the free charge of education brings more advantages than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00684931507 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81864919091 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4609191688 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124300101085 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372356665381 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394786311292 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773377322443 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01128401527 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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