The world natural resources are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
It is true that human is excessive consuming the natural resources. While there are some reasons that lead to this trend, I believe that various solutions are possible to reduce this problem.
Perhaps the major cause that is human purposes. This means that when the world’s population is dramatically raising, resulting in an increase in the demand for accommodations and houses. As a consequence, the large number of trees are cut down to meet the demand for housing and settlements, leading to various places are desertification. Moreover, natural resources are exploited excessively for food. For example, the huge number of fish are caught every year, which is a cause that some sea creatures are decreasing the quality as well as be listed on red list needing a reservation.
There are some measures which could be implemented to reduce this issue. Firstly, the government should enact to create stringent rules which prevent deforestation in future. For instance, by establishing national park area, the country may maintain and reserve not only plants but also animals, then apply heavy fines for who break the rules to deforest trees for commercial purposes. Furthermore, local authorities may run more campaigns to encourage residents to protect our natural resources. While restricted using them, we should research a variety of alternative ways of using resources more efficiency such as recycling materials, reusing green energy, upgrading technology in agriculture for more products.
In conclusion, some reasons why people are using natural possessions as much more they want without any consideration, and some simple solutions should be adopted to reduce this problem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ngent rules which prevent deforestation in future. For instance, by establishing national...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44106463878 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97368061302 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8616210833 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153958831641 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562259465974 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425652908039 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966172284233 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104502869958 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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