Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
Over the past 20 years, climate change has been a serious issue for the environment. Some argue that instead of non-renewable energy, we should use other resources such as the solar system and wind, while others say that oil, gas, and coal are important to many factories, and the closure of these resources might result in an economic crisis. In my opinion, a ban on fossil fuels does not affect the economy because it can be easily replaced with other resources whereas renewable energy is eco-friendly as well Boosts Public Health.
Firstly, renewable energy considered clean energy since it does not cause grave environment, and it also has low or zero greenhouse and carbon emission. Fossil fuel emit high level of carbon dioxide greenhouse gas, which are greatly responsible for global warming, climate change and degradation of air quality. In contrast, Solar system and wind power are eco-friendly because they emit zero toxic gases to the environment. According to world air quality report countries who produce 70% of their energy from clean energy sources are less polluted than the other who depend on fossil fuels as a source of energy.IN addition, solar power, wind power and energy storage, are non-pollutant, produce minimal or no waste products, and don’t contribute to global warming
Secondly, the sources for renewable energy generation emit little to no greenhouse gases or pollutants into the air. This means a smaller carbon footprint and an overall healthier atmosphere. If governments took upon themselves to build more renewable energy facilities, the population would enjoy the health benefits. According to a study by the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency, Americans spend approximately $300 to $800 billion every year on the overall health of the population. A big chunk of this budget goes to mitigate, hand cure diseases related to fossil fuel use like respiratory and cardiac health issues, cancer, and neurological disorders. Greenhouse, carbon and sulphur compounds emitted by the combustion of fossils fuels are risky to our health if inhaled over time. This is reason enough to consider renewable energy moving forward.
In conclusion, use of non-renewable cause environment issues and bad health so it must be replace by other resources like solar and wind power resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 625, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fuels as a source of energy.IN addition, solar power, wind power and energy stora...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29619565217 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80783061243 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589673913043 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.4444223363 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.214285714 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271483906197 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846906537592 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593511548492 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17120731987 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694821392388 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.