It is generally accepted that highly innovative technological gadgets have become introduced in all over the World such as laptops, smartphones, computers and more. So majority of children spend more free time in the indoors instead outdoor. It can create problems for the future which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, most of the parents can afford to buy electronic gadgets for their children and they are spoiling their kids by allowing them to use those items each day. Furthermore, guardians are also not giving enough time to their children because of busy in hectic schedules and try to give main attention to their professional jobs. Therefore, it is the main reason that due to the lack of encouragement and better care from parents. Many kids have less interest in the playground activities and they may get physically and mentally weakness when they spend more hours in front of digital screen. As a conseqences, it can create dismissive development because children are the present and future of every nation. So if they do not pay attention to participate outdoors they can become more lethargic as well as they will not be able to survive precious life.
Furthermore, taking part in outdoor activities and competitions helps children to a great extent because it enhances their personal status and personality as well as they can do social interaction with different types of people which is a useful for them to maintain healthy mindset. For an instance, a recent survey has proven that in the past, I children were most energetic and followed Healthy lifestyle because they were not using electronic techniques.
To conclude, I personally believe that outdoor activities bring a lot of benefits that's why children should be encouraged to take part in every outdoor game which is possible to play.
- Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly services information tasks Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 80
- The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday 78
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed However some people think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt 47
- The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca Cola 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...door activities bring a lot of benefits thats why children should be encouraged to ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09210526316 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80340364952 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5235396962 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223285925448 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840838495753 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686997966404 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135833888228 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453599703058 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.