In these present days the number of students is increasing day by day in Abroad. Mostly students prefer to go foreign for their further study and also students want better life style that's why they choose abroad for themselves. It is also necessary for students and countries. In this essay, I will discuss the merits and demerits in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are plenty of merits behind the trend. Firstly, Overseas students can be more independent by living alone in foreign country. In addition, they can get a lot of knowledge and also students can improve their communication skill. Students can know foreign culture and foreign language and Technology. Moreover, institutes give better courses and job opportunities with high salaries. It is very beneficial for students and countries.Overseas students can bright their future by studying abroad. It is very positive development for students physically and mentall.
On the other hand, the first drawback is that studying in foreign country has negative effects on students because they are forgetting their own culture and mother tongue when students go abroad there they have to face many difficulties regarding study. Students can feel unfamiliar in foreig. Nowadays especially teenagers mostly prefer to go abroad they can do wrong work when students become independent they can choose wrong way. Moreover, there are a lot of differences between foreign Institute and our country's institutes that's why parents also have to face more difficulties. Colleges fees in Abroad are very high and all facilities are more expensive as compared to native country.
To conclude, although studying in Abroad has more advantages, its disadvantages cannot be neglected because parents have to face more problems and students too. It is very negative impact on our GDP and also students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23469387755 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74416448233 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 294.0 20.2975951904 1448% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1539.0 106.682146367 1443% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 294.0 20.7667163134 1416% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 81.0 7.06120827912 1147% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294396680943 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.294396680943 0.084324248473 349% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197520001297 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052765375741 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 150.2 13.0946893788 1147% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -226.93 50.2224549098 -452% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 118.0 11.3001002004 1044% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.53 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.76 8.58950901804 253% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 119.6 10.1190380762 1182% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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