Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most society. How does this quality affect each individual and is it a positive or negative trend?
A person’s personality trait is highly influential in both their personal as well as professional life, especially if one is competitive. However, I opine that one should be competitive as it could bring people more benefits.
With regard to individual gains, being competitive drives people to change for the better. Take a student for example. Imagine what would happen if all the students in a class did not care about who was the best student, who had a higher score than themselves, the class could never make any progress. Therefore, even at an early age, the merit of this attribute is of significant value, whilst there are some arguments against this notion on the ground that little children should be carefree and should not think much about competing with friends so that they can enjoy a light-hearted childhood. However, this may lead to a generation of people just lazing around and having no desire to advance in life.
From my perspective, people should be encouraged to always aim higher in life. For example, one can try to find ways to improve the quality of products they are selling to increase their competitive edge over their rivals. Another example is that one employee can spend extra hours on their work to reach more customers than their co-workers. Not only is this attitude towards work beneficial to each person, but also to the company as a whole. Having said that, however, it is certainly true when someone is always obsessed with winning, it is absolutely unhealthy. Therefore, fair competitiveness must always be the key philosophy in any contention.
In summary, I am of the opinion that the encouragement for people to be competitive is necessary, but it should be done in a fair manner and not at the expense of other people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ghly influential in both their personal as well as professional life, especially if one is...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fair manner" with adverb for "fair"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ive is necessary, but it should be done in a fair manner and not at the expense of other people....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in summary, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80054558177 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3484943181 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.357142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136736859998 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510270984117 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438957891789 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793486354887 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240246688924 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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