Computer are being used more and more in education and some people say there will soon be no role for the teacher in education To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Computer are being used more and more in education and some people say there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Computer are being used more and more in life, especially in education recent years due to the COVID pandemic. But to say with the development of computer, there will soon be no role for the teacher in education so I disagree with it. It is true that computer have many functions and very useful for people such as entertainment, study, work. But the original purpose when creating computer is to be a tool to support people, so it is still the same now. Thanks to computer, people can do many things better and faster, people work more effectively, teachers teach better, students absorb more easily, get a lot of useful information. Computers useful, smart but that's still not enough for it to replace teachers in teaching students. Because it has no emotion like humans. It doesn't know how to say gentle words, encouragement, or advice to students. It also doesn't know how to feel student's feeling. In short, teachers will always be a part of education, nothing can replace those dedicated teachers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: that's
...nformation. Computers useful, smart but thats still not enough for it to replace teac...
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Line 1, column 736, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... replace teachers in teaching students. Because it has no emotion like humans. It doesn...
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Line 1, column 778, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: doesn't
...cause it has no emotion like humans. It doesnt know how to say gentle words, encourage...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...agement, or advice to students. It also doesnt know how to feel students feeling. In s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, in short, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84302325581 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67863040446 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645348837209 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4300681271 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436578377771 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13639537469 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115380882484 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.436578377771 0.151304729494 289% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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