Consumer goods have become the most important part of people 's live.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?
It is no doubt today consumer is a basic need in human being life through some older ponder that consumer have plenty merits and demerits.There are strong opinion consumer plays a vital role in whole life.There are plethora reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all the aspects and things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.The most predominant a couple of week everyone has liking whole consumer products.For instance, gadgets device, make kit, adventures, clothes and new trend so on.Therfore,
some dozen consider that consumer has a lot of significant in their life as well as they can easily find out new rituals and custom instead of new thing relate all nations round.Afterever, that why youngster might like consuming it.
Nevertheless,there are no denying that fact the,in my point of view there is manifold drawback for consumer about to health problem.Further more,sometimes off spring has could not knowledge relate to any food.Otherwise, they have only watching any adventures as far as they would order that time than they will be dangerous for health because sometimes people must not consciousness about things.For example,There should causing umpteen disease.last but not least,
cardiac,blood pressure, heart, anxiety,depression extra.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand it is true that consumer is very essential part of life all in all in my mind but also has use consuming please check all informing rather than any products.On other hand, most of time people using consuming for food so they shall be dangerous for health.Thus, consumer pros and cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30268199234 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15059034486 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1813518542 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 346.0 106.682146367 324% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.25 20.7667163134 314% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5 7.06120827912 404% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12638196834 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788996273185 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282823524149 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587466682482 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370711021203 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.2 13.0946893788 276% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 50.2224549098 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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