Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
These days, with the number of industries and companies mushrooming, people are exposed to an ever-increasing amount of advertising. The omnipresence of commercials misleads consumers and increases their spending, so protective measures must be applied.
The fact that advertising has become a multibillion-dollar industry, and much research has gone into its development and effectiveness in order to help businesses sell more products and services. Although advertisement can provide many benefits to consumers, it can have quite a negative impact on individuals and society as a whole. Firstly, adverts do not always provide the right information about goods, some ads exaggerate data about products with clients. For that reason, they may make purchases without thinking and waste money for what they do not actually need, especially in young shoppers. Secondly, if they buy any products through ads, they will have to pay for an exorbitant price which including adverts cost. This spending outnumbers the real value of products or services, but buyers are unaware of this hidden cost.
Therefore, both consumers and governments need to take actions to protect against repercussions that advertisements bring about. One possible solution is for customers to raise their knowledge to make smart shopping. For example, instead of depending totally on misleading information and not specific images provided in advertisements, they should take feedbacks from previous buyers and based on that to determine whether a purchase should occur or not. Furthermore, governments should apply standardized prices and quality for the same product of all brand, which will still maintain the competitiveness among many companies and users also feel secure when shopping.
In conclusion, the explosion in advertising services has caused customers suffering many troubles. Thus, effective remedies should be taken by both individuals and authorities to mitigate the problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73037542662 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17344850774 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672354948805 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2087954009 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.928571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203494654633 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625392062291 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550580048321 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119744478795 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532474783516 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.