Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
Advertisements are a way to convince people to consume a product. As with growing competitions among companies, consumers are the one who suffered the consequences of excess advertisements. I think Consumers are motivated from the advertisements to consume the product and should be protected by regulating the advertisements and
Firstly, The advertisements should be regulated by an authority or the government itself. The companies should be restricted by 2 advertisements a year, which could only be viewed by consumers 10 times a day and the companies should be penalised if they do not comply with the regulations. It would prevent companies from fighting over the advertisements, and would give a fair chance to each and every company to put their advertisements in front of the consumer. Moreover, It would also prevent the consumer to be influenced from the advertisements and would rather allow him to use critical thinking in choosing a product from advertisements.
Secondly, For companies competing over advertisements should be boycott from the consumers. It would allow companies to realize their mistakes and make them vigilant before taking similar steps and action in future. One of it's prime example can be the incident of coca cola in 2005, where a number of people boycott the drink on the actions of the company which later was apologized by the company as It effected their revenue.
In conclusion, Companies should be restricted by a regulation authority with limited number of advertisements and Consumers should also raise their voice and boycott the company, which make the company realize their mistakes and their consumers concerns.
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- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements What measures can be taken to protect them Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant 61
- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements What measures can be taken to protect them Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3536121673 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27222045978 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490494296578 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1536981092 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.8 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372625925599 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166313684811 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745043272587 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246867511146 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653447163735 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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