Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using the computer. Do you agree or disagree?
The restriction of teenagers curfew in US about staying and hanging out, except accompanied by adults is the way how to decrease the impact of criminalities among teenagers, as the result in providing sense of secure for parents and avoiding of any murder and kidnapping to teenagers.
Various news among the criminalities are talking about security life for all ages, especially young adults life. it takes concern of many organizations among infant and humanities life, how to decrease the percentage of criminalities among them, focused on female cases. about 50% of criminal case, females are the most victims of sexual harassment and robbery. Depend on the situation, police department claims how many of young people around age 14 – 18 years, are going outdoors over 10 p.m. without any adults. this is the reason, why criminal cases happen around humanities. furthermore, the awareness less from parent and teen is the main problems, however parent have the main role of growth and education of their children. restricted toddler to go away at night, will be one of the solution, to decrease the number of sexual harassment and robbery. News.com reported that in 2017, for 50% of cases are talk about sexual harassment on female, for 30% or it are explain for the incident occurred at night. furthermore, the percentage is not decrease, but increase dramatically in 2018, for 72%. And it cause many parents are afraid and worry for their children.
In other hand, the development of human traffic is another case of this era. although it only takes about 20% of the overall cases among children and teenagers, but this problem cannot be left. Before the rising of the problem, human and social department instruct to all parents and teachers to educate the children, such youth people to stay at home since 7 p.m., furthermore, outreach about the dangerous of promiscuity, smoking, drugs, and alcohol, can be a complete package of the instruction how to live safety and peace in society. parents intervention expected can be alternative way, why they should stay at home over night. although debate cannot be left, but as a good intention of all side and element, it hopes the criminalities among teenagers can be decreased. CNN.com describe that the way to decrease how much problems in children life, is the role of all element. Included government participation to tell that home is the best place for living people.
To conclude the explanation, teenagers should stay at home begin on 7 p.m. and forbidding them to go outside except accompanied by adults, it the right way to decrease the number of criminalities among young age. Then parent as the main role, should give the best thing and activities to comfort their children.
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- Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using the computer. Do you agree or disagree? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: About
...es among them, focused on female cases. about 50% of criminal case, females are the m...
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...riminal cases happen around humanities. furthermore, the awareness less from parent and tee...
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Suggestion: Restricted
...growth and education of their children. restricted toddler to go away at night, will be on...
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ual harassment on female, for 30% or it are explain for the incident occurred at ni...
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Line 9, column 970, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'explained'.
Suggestion: explained
...harassment on female, for 30% or it are explain for the incident occurred at night. fur...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...e dramatically in 2018, for 72%. And it cause many parents are afraid and worry for t...
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Line 9, column 1144, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
...nd it cause many parents are afraid and worry for their children. In othe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Although
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Parents
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Suggestion: Although
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Suggestion: many
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08552631579 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77321946321 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1334442331 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.95 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0548318620831 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0174016874462 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280235863203 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0278639605067 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321674483713 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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