Old generations often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for the young people to prepare for modern life. What’s your opinion?
With the rise in modernisation there us drastic change in between the generation gap. One of the most controversial issue today relates to old and young generation, it is argued that the traditional ideas of the old generation makes people life better. However, the other people argued that it is not beneficial for younger one's. I am going to examine this essay from both points of view.
On one side, there are group of people who believe that the ideas of old generation have a great significance on our way of thinking and behaviour. As they are highly expierenced about life and know the issues which can be in our future life. The people of old generation work really hard which can encourage the young children to be hard worker and trustworthy. For instance, the people used to stick to their one job for whole life and do it properly. So, they claim that these type of things children should adopt to be successful in future.
On the other side, there are people who oppose that it is not useful, if children wants to live life happily in modern world. Firstly, the conventional value can restrict teenagers from think globally which in cause can spoil the children future. So, they have to understand some universal languages because in old time people do not have communication facilities, which is crucial in these days. They need to go with modern era; have to learn about internet and smartphone which is useful for everyone to be updated about the world.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the traditional ideas of old generation is not bad but it should be updated with new advancement of technology, to live life in proper way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: groups
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Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62745833961 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506944444444 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4914215895 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338508538813 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111300220102 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745558847518 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206260240829 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443587481266 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.