Some people say that playing alone is more beneficial, whereas others give more importance to playing in team. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, sports play a vital role in our life and there are number of games available all over the world. Apart from this, people have different views whether it is crucial to play in a team or alone. Although playing individually is believed to be rather indispensible. I agreed with those who consider team work as more essential.
On one hand, there are number of people who believe that playing individually is best because it makes the sportsperson more dependent and self-reliant. Instead of this, there will be no restrictions for them; they can play on its own pace. But one has to work very hard because the chances of winning a game totally depends on his sheers.
On the other hand, there are people who argued that the player playing in team will gather a lot of inter-personal skills like co-operation and patience among all the players which cannot acquire by playing alone. Moreover, players work collectively to achieve one goal which can make the game more interesting, hard and difficult. For instance, the survey conducted in Mumbai sport centre where they seen that 70% of people preffered teamup games like cricket, football and hockey.
In conclusion, there is no complement for players to play in team or alone but I firmly believe that playing in team will be more substantial for the players rather than individually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98684210526 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77762503427 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.353248605 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.125 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24137751994 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109575508117 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500761241515 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163872149962 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042543808558 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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