Corona Virus is becoming a big problem for todays' Society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as govenrments losing a big part of budget. While COVID 19 is treating the globe from polluting and other affects of humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the advancement of state standards of our living habits and globalized world, our planet has become so accessible interdependent that one small shift in any part of the globe can have enormous consequences on the rest of the humanity. A newly discovered Covid-19 (Coronavirus) remaining as the most challenging hurdle that human beings faced once in thousand years. A great part of the world has been struggling from unusual contagious disease causing the death of thousands of people and raising a huge amount of economic losses while tens of thousands of lives have been saved due to reduced air pollution during coronavirus lockdowns. This essay sheds light on both points before stating my personal viewpoint.
To begin with, a few months ago precisely on December 31, China alerted World Health Organization (WHO) to several cases of unusual pneumonia in Wuhan, a port city of 11 million people in central Hubei province. The newly discovered virus COVID-19 spread quickly among Wuhan. Most countries underestimated its effect and did not want to lend a hand to the continent. Yet, when it started to spread to almost all countries starting from Thailand, Japan, US, Nepal, France, Australia, Malaysia, Singapore, South Korea and etc. they all decided to unite their medical experiences and pause the threat. Currently, almost all countries have been fighting with a new virus asking their local population to stay at home and working hard to find an appropriate vaccine to the virus.
On the other hand, the coronavirus pandemic is shutting down countries across the world, causing a significant decline in air pollution in major cities as countries implement stricter quarantines and travel restrictions. Dramatic reduction is witnessed in the amount of harmful greenhouse gas emissions in the atmosphere. Thousands of lives have been saved in China since the coronavirus outbreak started, claim scientists, saying lockdowns have dramatically improved air quality. Across the globe countries are implemented measures to restrict public interactions including closing pubs, cancelling events and encouraging home working. Limiting travel has led to a reduction in vehicle emissions and cutting the amount of industrial activity has led to a drop in the number of harmful particles put in the air.
Both points considered, unexpected appearance of a new virus staggered people and at the same time the world we are living in. Even if it is taking the lives of thousands, reviving atmosphere tends to give a new life to millions in the future of human beings. As we first make our habits, and then our habits make us.
Zarnigor Bakhriddinova
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32857142857 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08751784447 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.8974760366 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.875 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130305916386 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361144745098 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366551252711 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597483161466 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505424132806 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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