Corporal punishment should be banned in schools. Do you agree or disagree?
Educational approaches have provoked heated debates for decades. Some people would encourage physical punishment at school as they believe it could do wonders for students. Nevertheless, others would argue that this approach can have various negative effects on pupils. Personally, I completely agree that corporal punishment should be prohibited and replaced by different methods.
Firstly, corporal punishment is believed to have adverse effects on education. Hitting or smacking students can force them to comply with regulations for a short time due to angst; however, when encountering in the long term, they may rebel and become mischievous. Furthermore, this kind of punishment can spoil the relationship between teachers and students. Consequently, it creates an oppressive atmosphere in classrooms, which will reduce the effectiveness of schooling.
Secondly, physical punishment is likely to cause mental issues to pupils. Being exposed to violence at high frequency may lead to the belief that violence is the most effective way to solve an issue. Therefore, they will commit assaults in the future. Additionally, disciplining by thrashing or whipping results in a fear of schools and teachers, which means that they can lose the interest in studying. More seriously, children may suffer from panic attacks and anxiety disorders.
In conclusion, corporal punishment causes considerable harms to students, hence schools should eliminate this method. My view is that teachers should make good friends with students and they can have an intimate talk to address the problems.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70168067227 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99484350761 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659663865546 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.515900041 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210219726352 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690600229706 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902721738942 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130883697364 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663568644688 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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