Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, with the widespread use of the Internet, humans can gain unlimited access to global information, even historical items and artworks displayed in museums or exhibitions. Consequently, many people question the importance of memorial houses and art galleries and they believe that these will become inessential one day. Personally, despite the advantages of the Internet, museums and galleries will never be terminated.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that people can derive numerous benefits from the Internet. Firstly, students around the world can learn about historical objects and admire the aesthetic value of artworks of different countries with a laptop or a smartphone connected to the Internet. For example, learners in Vietnam can conveniently enjoy Picasso’s masterpieces on the Internet without travelling to museums in Spain. Secondly, onscreen viewing of historical objects is beneficial for people from a deprived background. It enables them to self-study about the history and art of other countries.
On the other hand, museums and art exhibitions play an indispensable role in human life. Firstly, visiting memorial houses and art galleries provide people with a sense of reality. Visitors can watch the objects on their own eyes or even interact with artists in person, which is impossible when they view through their computers. Furthermore, museums and galleries preserve relics and important artifacts of a country, which can represent its culture. Consequently, the disappearance of the museums will have a negative impact on upholding tradition. Finally, art galleries and museums can attract a host of tourists, hence these places will contribute to economic prosperity.
In conclusion, although the Internet brings some benefits, the role of museums and art exhibitions are irreplaceable. My view is that people can combine computer-based information and experience to enhance their knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6941580756 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0981168219 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.408525113 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333984127094 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106989308485 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406256789361 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206895406846 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258604663531 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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