The cost of living is higher in many countries. What are the effects of higher prices to individuals and society? What is the best way for people to deal with this problem?
It is true that a significant increase in the cost of living can easily be seen in many nations around the world. Although there will be undoubtedly some negative consequences of this trend, several useful steps can be taken to mitigate this potential problem.
As there has been a rise in the cost of living currently, both individual people and society are affected. From individual person’s perspective, it leaves people struggling to pay for basic essentials in their daily lives. For instance, they will show more concern towards the problem of fuels, transports, clothing and shelters. Therefore, they will be under higher pressure of earning money and take higher risks of suffering from detrimental health-related issues. From society’s perspective, the gap between the poor and the rich will be lengthened. For example, wealthy inhabitants may still have money to deal with high cost of living, whereas the poorer ones may work harder to make their livings.
With a view to facing up with this problem, people should take action to solve the problem mentioned above. The best suggestion would be to migrate to other countries which have lower cost of living compared to their own ones. To illustrate, residents in Hong Kong can move to Vietnam to live by virtue of lower prices of daily necessities including house renting, groceries and entertainments.
In conclusion, while higher cost of living has exerted pernicious impacts upon not only the countries but also their dwellers in these countries, individual people should migrate to other nations which have lower cost of living.
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...ations which have lower cost of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23255813953 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82672693998 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8546448254 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312396686054 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102436514327 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517109337979 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1708754069 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397484430657 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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