The cost of living is higher in many countries. What are the effects of higher prices to individuals and society? What is the best way for people to deal with this problem?
These day, unprecedentedly exorbitant cost of living becomes a profoundly concerned issue which may have detrimental influences on the needy as well as societies. From my personal perspective, launching welfare subsidies would be the most viable measure to address repercussion brought about by high living cost.
On individual level, the most serious drawback of aforementioned problem is devastating impacts on the decent life of people living below the poverty line. When the increases in salary level are negligible compare to increasing in living cost, impoverished people can not afford essential things such as food, medicine and so on resulting in the rise in the number of people who are malnourished or having diseases. Moreover, high cost of living can lead to the growth of discrimination between the rich and the poor. Since underprivileged people can not make ends meet, they are not able to access to higher education which enable them have respect from the others. This can cause the unfair treatment with the poor.
On social level, rising living cost can make societies unstable. Indeed, since people do not have enough money to recover their lives, they can be led to the guilty path which help them improving their poor circumstances. In addition, the significant percentage of crime and poor people also create financial burden for governments. For example, when there are robberies, governments have to spend money to investigate and to overcome consequences.
People should have appropriate actions to cope with multifaceted problems. The best way to mitigate this problem is starting a welfare scheme to financially support the poor. The state and benefactors should provide money for basic needs and tuition fee for impoverished people. In this way, this problem can not put pressure in people’s consumption budget so people will have a better lives and education.
In summary, high cost of living can cause negative effects on both societies and individual, however, there are many proposal for this issue
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
... led to the guilty path which help them improving their poor circumstances. In addition, ...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ercome consequences. People should have appropriate actions to cope with multif...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uences. People should have appropriate actions to cope with multifaceted proble...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun proposal seems to be countable; consider using: 'many proposals'.
Suggestion: many proposals
...ties and individual, however, there are many proposal for this issue
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9081904546 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6471405228 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.3125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275057048828 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901426289645 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524039950521 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155651735231 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627637657057 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.