Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, it is possiblle for people to buy the same products in all over the world so that it seemed like every countries have a lot of thing in common. some people believe that it is has some disadvantages, how ever I convinced that it is a positive development.
it can be clearly seen that if people can buy the stuff from anywhere in the world, the world economy will develop significantly. Due to the revolution of internet connect people in the world together and make it easier for people to do online shopping, it mean we can buy stuff from another countries without travelling and a person who live in foreign can do the same thing. As a result, there are more international branch appear in a countries and contribute to raise of economy because every companies can extend their markets and introduce their products to many kind of people not only in national residents but also international residents.
another strong reason is tourists or migrant workers may find it more comfortable when they come to a stranger country. Those people will find many similar things in comparison with their countries in order to start a new life or have a better trip such as some products from their hometown will make them more convinient in daily life. More over, if people can see the same thing in a country that they used to have in their local area, they will have motivate to move to that country to work or book a tour for their vacation. this benefit lead to the sharp development of tourism and labour market in the world.
In conclusion, even have some drawbacks, it is impossible to deny the merits of this development and i strongly recommend that we need to find some effective solutions to make this trend be popular in every countries while their tradition culture or local products have to be protect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...hat it seemed like every countries have a lot of thing in common. some people believe that it ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...ountries have a lot of thing in common. some people believe that it is has some disa...
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Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: HOW_EVER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'however'?
Suggestion: however
...ieve that it is has some disadvantages, how ever I convinced that it is a positive devel...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...d that it is a positive development. it can be clearly seen that if people can ...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'means'?
Suggestion: means
...er for people to do online shopping, it mean we can buy stuff from another countries...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'branches'?
Suggestion: branches
... a result, there are more international branch appear in a countries and contribute to...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...markets and introduce their products to many kind of people not only in national resident...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...ts but also international residents. another strong reason is tourists or migrant wo...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'motivated'.
Suggestion: motivated
...ave in their local area, they will have motivate to move to that country to work or book...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...work or book a tour for their vacation. this benefit lead to the sharp development o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70093457944 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62442524097 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514018691589 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7084928203 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.9 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309265440479 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122949335067 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386758342623 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179220460433 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572953627254 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.