Some people think that children centres provide the best services for children play school age other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better cares for their kids
Setting a punishment for someone that fits a crime has always been a controversial topic among people. some of them believed that there should be a specific punishment for each crime, while I think that we should always consider individuals because every crime has a story behind it.
Those who say every sin should have a fixed punishment believe that committing a crime is morally wrong. If we want to have control over people and prevent them from committing a crime, this action is a necessity. In addition, some serious crimes regardless of situation and individual's condition must have a fixed punishment, because these types of crimes can have an adverse effect on society and usually the victims are not able to continue their normal life again, and they are badly hurt. some good examples of these crimes are child abuse, rape, and acid attack.
On the other hand, considering criminals background and motives can be beneficial to have a justice system of punishment. many factors have to be considered for punishing the criminals fairly, such as motives and mental conditions. In many cases, the criminals commit the crime for self-defense, or they are mentally ill, so they are sick, not criminals. Finally, the age of the criminals is important to, because most of the adult punishment are too severe for juveniles. there can be some penalties in some cases, since in that age usually, their actions are under the influence of their unstable emotions.
In conclusion, fixing punishments cannot be helpful in many cases, and in my opinion, we have to consider many factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03773584906 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69153704461 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5582722103 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137079082048 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572284800131 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408996033308 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812305673061 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560476729348 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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