Countries around the world produce more and more waste every year through domestic and industrial activities.What are the causes of this excessive waste production? How does it affect the environment?
The annual increase in garbage, which is caused by household activities and factories, has been an insurmountable issue over the last few decades. This essay will examine the reasons that lead to this redundant waste production and some serious effects on the environment.
Turning to the domestic causes. There are many reasons for this problem, but the most probable cause is that the lack of people’s awareness. Wealthy people tend to buy plenty of products that more than they need. For instance, once people go to restaurants, they probably get used to ordering more than they eat or trendy people would love to constantly update their electronic devices. As a result, their redundant food or old gadgets will end up in landfills. If more and more landfills are required, deforestation may increase to adapt to this expansion. Therefore, it will lead to habitat loss, especially creatures that live in the forest.
Regarding to the causes of industrial activities, it is caused by the manufacturing process, which is more expanding due to overpopulation in many major cities nowadays. In addition, because of high living standards, more and more advanced products are required. Hence it might lead to the rise in chemical use in factories. If those chemical wastes or sewage are not processed before being released into the environment, it can seriously affect nature. For instance, smog from factories can make the air polluting and directly contribute to the Greenhouse effect. In other words, it causes global warming and many more relating effects.
In conclusion, human wastes from both domestic or industrial activities can have significant impacts on the environment. Therefore, solutions need to urgently emerge to address these effects. By reducing or carefully considering products before paying the bills, we can partly help our environment better.
- Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects To what extent do you agree 89
- Topic Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school What are the reasons How to tackle this problem 84
- Countries around the world produce more and more waste every year through domestic and industrial activities What are the causes of this excessive waste production How does it affect the environment 84
- Some people think that technology is now an invaluable study tool for young people Others however believe that it is harmful for the studying process Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34459459459 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89911323688 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.541030549 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264772565549 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738603955516 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595317012522 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148952995471 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277170215174 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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