Countries around the world produce more and more waste every year through domestic and industrial activities. What are the causes of this excessive waste production? How does it affect the environment?
Modern society is generating and increasing a million tons of trash per year, including domestic and industrial activities. These are one of the pressing issues for governments in both developed and developing countries. With the inevitably rising population, this problem will be exaggerated. The essay will explore some causes and describe the effects of this.
To begin with, domestic waste is the most popular reason of serious environmental degradation. It seems likely that different food producers decide to pack them in a small colorful packets or boxes to attract customers. After meals, these small-sized bags are straight to the trash can. As a result, the number of packages go along with increased waste and the plastic consumption has taken ages to dissolve completely. Thus, several beaches in Vietnam have been spoiled by this lack of respect for the local environment, as well as ignorance of the governments. Furthermore, due to advertised marketing, people prefer replacing old items to new one although the existing is still working, producing more waste. Hence, it is apparent that more and more residents are contributing to domestic waste that ends up in landfill sites. These could have led to contamination of land and health hazard.
In addition, industrial waste is also one of the primary factors contributing to damaging the environment. Obviously, nowadays, several factories and industrial zones have been discharging chemical waste into rivers, causing death to many fishes and other aquatic species. Moreover, global warming can result from disposal of industrial waste. Finally, in some agricultural methods today, farmers tend to spray pesticide or chemicals to increase their profits instead of using manual ways. These chemicals will be absorbing into soil and resulting in water pollution, diseases which alarm people's lives as well.
In conclusion, it is true that the environment is seriously damaged by human activities, typically domestic and industrial waste. I believe action must be taken before it is too late. Some solutions are that ___ government should make awareness campaigns to educate people how to respect the environment as a means of protecting our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'packet'?
Suggestion: packet
...decide to pack them in a small colorful packets or boxes to attract customers. After me...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... These chemicals will be absorbing into soil and resulting in water pollution, d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45058139535 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90785463315 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645348837209 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7038202582 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212359433602 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542824868586 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544729873529 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11159300915 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360120225642 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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