Countries around the world produce more and more waste every year through domestic and industrial activities. What are the causes of this excessive waste production? How does it affect the environment?
The annual increase in garbage, which is caused by household activities and factories, has been an insurmountable issue over the last few decades. This essay will examine the reasons that lead to this redundant waste production and some serious effects on the environment.
Turning to the domestic causes. There are many reasons for this problem, but the most probable cause is the lack of people’s awareness. Wealthy people tend to buy plenty of products that ___are__ more than they need. For instance, once people go to restaurants, they probably get used to ordering more than they eat or trendy people would love to constantly update their electronic devices. As a result, their redundant food or old gadgets will end up in landfills. If more and more landfills are required, deforestation may increase to adapt to this expansion. Therefore, it will lead to habitat loss, especially creatures that live in the forest.
Regarding the causes of industrial activities, it is caused by the manufacturing process, which is more expanded due to overpopulation in many major cities nowadays. In addition, because of high living standards, more and more advanced products are required. Hence it might lead to the rise in chemical use in factories. If this chemical waste or sewage is not processed before being released into the environment, it can seriously affect nature. For instance, smoke from factories can make the air polluted and directly contribute to the Greenhouse effect. In other words, it causes global warming and many more related effects.
In conclusion, human waste from both domestic or industrial activities can have significant impacts on the environment. Therefore, solutions need to urgently emerge to address these effects. By reducing or carefully considering products before paying the bills, we can partly help our environment better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32881355932 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89368052103 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6414327489 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269579004997 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756231215148 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603003609675 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152806715788 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343325489822 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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