Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Since the last few decades, countries are facing hindrance in their progress due to various factors like environment, population, and literacy. In this essay, we are going to discuss the problems that India will face in the upcoming 10 years due to changes in circumstances of environment, population, and education. Not only that, but we'll also go through the strategies to overcome.
In India, Inhabitants have increased tremendously since the past few years and currently, the count is more than 1.3 billion. And as per a research done in 2015, the expected citizens in the year 2022, will be more than 27 billion. While the rate of literacy is 81.3%, which has sluggishly risen in recent years. But, still, the people staying in remote areas are not lucky enough to get schooling. There are some states in India, which are so backward that they still haven't received electricity in their surroundings. Moreover, after the increase in global warming, Bharat is also one of the victims of its effect. There have been frequent earthquakes, tsunami, cyclones, and other natural disasters, that India has faced in the last few years. And it will still affect more if global warming will keep rising.
To overcome such a problem, there has been some initiative already been taken by the government of India. They are now providing free schooling and scholarships in remote areas. And due to the rise in the rate on teaching, people have now started believing in nuclear families. Hence, playing an important role in controlling the growth of people. Also, it has become mandatory for everyone to plant trees during the environment week held during the first week of June. Students from different schools participate in different environmental functions to bring awareness among the youths.
In a nutshell, the condition of India won't be worse, if proper measures will be taken, but if not, it will harm the local people in a very bad way. It will still face more challenges to fight against these factors, but it will be worthwhile if everyone takes responsibility to manage themselves the nation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
..., which are so backward that they still havent received electricity in their surroundi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 766, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...n the last few years. And it will still affect more if global warming will keep rising. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fighting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: fighting
...ay. It will still face more challenges to fight against these factors, but it will be w...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03151862464 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74253199822 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593123209169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1334363462 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4210526316 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21052631579 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215400296878 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532737671392 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608880536581 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130608060725 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707924677293 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
..., which are so backward that they still havent received electricity in their surroundi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 766, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...n the last few years. And it will still affect more if global warming will keep rising. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fighting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: fighting
...ay. It will still face more challenges to fight against these factors, but it will be w...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03151862464 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74253199822 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593123209169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1334363462 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4210526316 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21052631579 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215400296878 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532737671392 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608880536581 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130608060725 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707924677293 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.