Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The distinctive problem associated with living in abroad of your country is to speak another language. Many people believe the speaking with non mother tongue causing increasingly widened gap and obstacles for persons or youngsters in their environment. Opponents argue that taking the foreign language does not cause a trouble because the people there understand the situation like that. In my opinion, I agree totally with this assessment and I will introduce evidence supporting that.
First of all, some people believe that speaking another language imply to numerous issues such as misunderstanding the surrounded world which causing inevitable dangerous matters and put them in embarrassed cases as well as unacceptable effects on your job or study. Moreover, he or she will not do the assigned tasks in your work because of the misconnection. For example, the study has conducted in one of the developed country illustrated 50% of expat students suffering of fully understanding their courses which finally effect on their marks.
The opponents to this opinion argue that the talking the foreign language can not impact on your situation because the people in that country estimate the case of expatriate and help them in learning and acquire the skills for adaptation. For instance, a TV program in BBC station called adaptation showed most of the expats from undeveloped country work and study in British without noticeable problems.
To sum up, numerous youngsters in our society believe the talking foreign language causing obstacles because of the missed conception for the original people in a work or a college. Others argue that there are no justifications to think about that because the human has key feature named adaptation.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32129963899 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86171625191 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5245414454 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151930691354 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557729233676 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303289548034 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895744839986 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267764828661 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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