As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you think the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
We are pacing in a rapidly changing era where people are more likely to purchase cars due to society demanding. Some people believe that the method of transportation is an essential need nowadays while others claim that gas emissions caused by cars' engine could be dangerous for the surrounding environment. I personally believe that cars filled with petrol should be replaced with electronic ones for an eco-friendly purpose and so, a better life quality.
First and foremost, cars are the easiest and most valuable way to move worldwide. For instance, millions are the cars sold each year, even in third world countries. Delays are drastically reduced during daily routine thanks to cars capabilities. Moreover, individuals are likely to be less stress at workplaces and they are more concentrated, relaxed and productive. In addition, the personal benefits of owning a car extend to individuals of all age groups, take, for instance, high school students who usually require travelling between school and their part-time jobs.
However, supporters of the opponent view claim that having more personal cars lead to extremely detrimental side effects on the environment. It is noteworthy that gas emissions and fumes emitted by cars are extremely harmful to the environment. The increasing number of cars has brought is the cumulative greenhouse effect. Additionally, as a result of rapidly increasing fuel consumption and consequent carbon dioxide, global warming is at a rise. Furthermore, chest and lungs illness are more likely to happen, comparing to past years. Recent researches have quoted, that the millennials suffer from chronic chest infections more often than their ancestors, as an outcome of their increased daily exposure to harmful gases.
According to the aforementioned arguments, it is evident that the number of car users is increasing in years, despite the side effects that cars have on the environment. As far as I am concerned, cars are an indispensable need in societies. However, they should be used in moderation or even prohibiting the use of cars on certain days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, third, while, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34337349398 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99793077136 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0778646424 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.352941176 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114573233207 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370455390718 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371510439336 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715969667608 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451100873416 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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