People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
In the 21st century, people lead their lives in hectic rhythms. Safety conditions and laws are a debatable issue. Some people believe that providing a proper safety system is essential nowadays. As far as I am concerned a set of Draconian measures should be enforced in society.
First and foremost, there are a plethora of causes regarding city security. At home, individual lives are exposed to risk due to internet data. For instance, giving private credential to websites or either your address leads to a tracking process from unknown people behind the screen. Furthermore, being out with friends, especially at night, may be extremely dangerous in certain cities, where the police forces are not that involved or they are even corrupted by ill-intentioned. Moreover, news channels report sensational crimes to increase their viewership and ratings. It is quite natural for someone who is constantly exposed to violent images of terror in public spaces to be concerned about their own safety.
Bearing in mind that the given problems project a fraction of the reality of safety norms in contemporary society, it is mandatory to ensure that laws will be passed that will prevent people being afraid of surrounding reality. By promoting the presence of more police forces on the streets to deter criminals from committing crimes. Individuals who are worried about their safety should try not to expose themselves to too much violent content on the TV or the internet. By carefully choosing what to watch on TV they can reduce their exposure to violent crimes and at the same time increase their feeling of safety.
According to the aforementioned arguments, it is evident that criminality is a tangible issue in modern society. I personally believe that governments and individuals tackle the feelings of insecurity among the public by working together to reduce crime rates and preparing for unexpected natural events.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er safety system is essential nowadays. As far as I am concerned a set of Draconia...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'realities'.
Suggestion: realities
...vent people being afraid of surrounding reality. By promoting the presence of more poli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, may, moreover, regarding, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23870967742 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81607545306 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603225806452 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8133840637 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135316511031 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362238290627 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432018806442 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681391902007 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363835799942 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.