Many countries around the world has a size of families is not as large as they used to be. Development of countries and the changing perspective of people to have a small nuclear family rather than a large extend family.
One Of The principal reasons for smaller family unit is birth control. As a country develops and becomes richer, birth control become more readily available. This may be due to a rise in the no. Of medical clinics. The result of this is that people can choose family size. Another important factor is the rise in the levels of education which mean that woman are more educated and more likely to be working so many will want to delay children.
This impact on society in the no. Of ways. One positive effect is that the population will fall. There will be less competition for scare resources. The parents can also able to provide a better education to their children because it will cost less. A possible negative impact is that there will be fewer younger people in the workforce in the future, these making the sustainability of future economic growth.
In conclusion,family size has fallen due to birth control and education and this can have positive and negative impact on society. Regardless of many impacts, the trend is continue in around world
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , family
...uture economic growth. In conclusion,family size has fallen due to birth control an...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...egardless of many impacts, the trend is continue in around world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78828828829 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59184429433 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.022559413 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8666666667 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169180825339 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595154657961 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623462306356 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109164582827 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383548443199 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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