The given bar graphs illustrate the information about marital status of Americans from 1970 to 2002.
The given data suggests that in 1970,70% adults married which was near about 2.5 million people while 1 million people divorced. After 10 year marriages ratio was same but divorces ratio was increased by 0.5 million ratio. In 1990 marriages rate slightly decline while divorces rate slightly increase. In 2000, marriages ratio decline moreover divorces rate also decline.
The second bar graph indicate that in 1970, less than 1% adults divorced which was near about negligble while after 30 years 10% adults married. In both year maximum adults married. In begining around 15% adults never married while 10% adults widowsed. In 2000, never marriages ratio was rise up while widowed rate went down.
Overall, numbee of never married and divorced adults was slightly increased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ever married while 10% adults widowsed. In 2000, never marriages ratio was rise up...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34285714286 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23085963115 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6216137305 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111135249978 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541407400604 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640529721586 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878166080132 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082329932654 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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