Countries should produce the food that their population eats, and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons, examples to your answer
The belief in reducing amount of food exports as much as possible and increasing the provision of citizens with local groceries os common these days. I do support this standpoint and evidences will be given in the following paragraphs.
Prospering local trade with variety of vegetations directly influences the cost drop positively and awakens sense of satisfaction in population. Huge competition creates low cost tendency in markets reducing it significantly which is profitable for customers. Another plus point is having qualitative products in markets, as farmers would do their best to supply with good quality food to be well-known and promote their business. One more vital factor is usage of natural resources. As a fact, the most grown and cared foods are exported first and rest is spreaded around motherland. Reducing the quantities of abroad supply ameliorates healthy food delivery for locals.
Nevertheless, some calims that the financial sector might have some obstacles since international trade cover most parts of GPA in some countries, while government's budget might experience some plunges due to cheap trade in local markets.
Personally I claim that growing up plants giving food population eats is first and foremost as delighted and healthy people contribute a lot on development of a county. For example, healthy nations healthy flourishment that leads to wonderful consequences.
In conclusion, country should take deep consideration on supplying population with affordable and high-quality food being able to overcome financial disstability effecting export reduction.
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- TASK 1 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groceries'' or 'grocery's'?
Suggestion: groceries'; grocery's
...ng the provision of citizens with local groceries os common these days. I do support this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66390041494 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05354160285 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680497925311 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.442254573 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124669373747 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403012967865 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042660928026 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660545028638 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356028574888 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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