in some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case?
do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Having private house is crucial in some countries while some prefer to rent accommodations instead of owning them. There might be variety factors as a reason, I admit there is something to be considered and below I would love to highlight ups and downs and cases of this phenomenon.
Some people’s priority is enjoying their private accommodations as this is first and foremost step to provide their family with safe and sound life. Another factor is going to be independence, there is a saying “better to be slave at your own home instead of being king in someone’s”, this is must have item to fell free. Third reason is about males, building or purchasing their own building gives them confidence which is vital for them to step up in life.
Personally I assume, this is positive development, from financial side to improvement of life-satisfaction. There myriad businessmen who build block of houses and sell, this is quite beneficial for government’s budget, beauty and makes easy state’s duty while others enjoy having built and decorated houses. For example, those business people provide some amount of citizens with job opportunities besides, pay taxes, ameliorate self-satisfaction of people by equipping fascinating houses and promoting attractiveness of state.
However, there is a standpoint must be mentioned when believing construction of houses to individual entrepreneurs this is quality of buildings. It should be controlled by government organizations since entrepreneurs might not be enough literate about standards of building.
To put everything into a nutshell, I pen down saying that pluses of owning home overcome minuses and abovementioned reasons prove it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, so, third, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2751238838 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9360117362 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241326724599 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873738075208 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386889980386 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123067779639 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571269489802 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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