In countries where there is high unemployment, most pupils should be
offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education
to those who will have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
In some part of the world, with the unemployment rate is becoming increasingly popular and the younger generation is struggling to seek a job. It is often said that secondary courses are no longer essential, and I completely disagree with this point of view.
One of the most significant reasons for the crucial of education is well-rounded development of the children. First, when the children get early education, they will receive a fundamental knowledge which is impact on all prospects of their life. The children have grown up without knowledge-based is challenging to get a decent job, so many of them are more likely to turn to crime.
Besides, spending time learning through the courses expanded their mind not only academic perspective but also job-related skills such as social skills, computer skills, and language abilities. Such abilities will certainly help them more advantage than the one who does not get sufficient education.
The second reason that I disagree with this statement is the demand for the labor market. First of all, the world is transforming very fast and unpredictable and therefore change the job requirement. For instance, there is an increasing tendency for technology-based jobs instead of agriculture field or manufacturing. Also, from an economic perspective, highly-educated play a pivotal role.
In conclusion, although some still argue that receiving a basic education in primary school is adequate for pupils in many countries, It seems to me that education always doing wonder for child development. Not only for their good prospects and their future but also contribute to the country workforce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
... without knowledge-based is challenging to get a decent job, so many of them are more ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o contribute to the country workforce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37307692308 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12249663044 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657692307692 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8603634075 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134907253012 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423905325614 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263740261793 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676591117448 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173366607949 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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