As a country developes people tend to buy more cars. Do the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
In this twenty first century, Remarkable enrichment has been satisfactorily done on a wide range of significant sectors such as Transportation, Education, Health Sector and Employment sector. It is a symbol of development for the particular country. As per the modern times and circumstances, Demand of purchasing cars has been sharply accelerated by people it is a good for People but quite dreadful to environment.
First of all, in this materialistic world, everyone has a dream to buy a car for smooth transportation aspect and it also well facilitates great amount of comfort and convenience in reaching expected places in short period of time that is a very ample advantage of having car. However purchasing car has become indeed easier for ordinary people in their respective countries because many financial options are available for people. Adequate amount of financial assistance as loan can be easily granted by banks for the people who want to buy cars.
Second of all, the trend of purchasing luxurious cars in developing countries among a fair amount of people has been rapidly excelling by leaps and bounds. It unquestionably demonstrates delusion of owning cars among people and excessive amount of money is being invested behind this noble cause by them is the nude reality of twenty first century.
People can access to their chosen venues with help of cars as quickly as possible whether they might be office, business place, company or school and so on. Commuting in cars is very much safer and easier for a majority of people on the flip side, the people who own cars they have to spend high amount of money for cars' maintenance and insurance every certain time. Sometimes it may make a big hole in our pockets and it can ruin us financially and our family budget can be scattered and over consumption of car omite carbon monoxide and sulphur dioxide which are extremely aweful to our health as a result it cause many incurable disorders.
To sum up, in my opinion, cars should be purchased by people as per their requirement but as per the time, they should be well maintained and they must be used for right needs of us. We all should grow more trees to make this world green lush and pollution free.
- The Graphs bellow show results of a survey of college going boys and girls activities other than academic studies Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 91
- As a country developes people tend to buy more cars. Do the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In this twenty first century, Remarkable...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
In this twenty first century, Remarkable enrichment has been...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e but quite dreadful to environment. First of all, in this materialistic worl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ce in reaching expected places in short period of time that is a very ample advantage of havin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s a very ample advantage of having car. However purchasing car has become indeed easier...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the people who want to buy cars. Second of all, the trend of purchasing l...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
...le cause by them is the nude reality of twenty first century. People ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...hem is the nude reality of twenty first century. People can access...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ude reality of twenty first century. People can access to their chosen venues...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ertain time. Sometimes it may make a big hole in our pockets and it can ruin us f...
^^
Line 7, column 528, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can be scattered and over consumption of car omite carbon monoxide and sulphur di...
^^
Line 7, column 632, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...ely aweful to our health as a result it cause many incurable disorders. ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 637, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...weful to our health as a result it cause many incurable disorders. ...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it cause many incurable disorders. To sum up, in my opinion, cars should be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...grow more trees to make this world green lush and pollution free.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, in short, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88421052632 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77513694104 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0650546275 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.769230769 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2307692308 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210379485714 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091413368021 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069347333597 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122119088189 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636743682954 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.