Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Recently, the phenomenon of freedom and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, whereas in many countries, artists can freely manifest their thoughts and beliefs, miscellaneous restrictions are implemented in other nations against their freedom. In my mind, advocating freedom to artists and prodigies ends up various advantages regarding production of masterpieces and the society.
Obviously, breathtaking artefacts are as a result of donating liberty to artists. For instance, masterpieces of Shakespeare or such movies as Godfather were produced because of artists’ freedom. These marvelous feats could be considered as twofold purpose: first, a sign for future generations as a symbol of freedom in their past societies, second, as training guidelines for youths. Hence, setting limitations for artists leads to their innovation’s death.
Moreover, societies should benefit from artists’ freedom in terms of their manifestation. Prodigies, through their creative minds, always have expressed the weakside of societies in several manners, like humor or poem, by means of their great work. Thus, governors should grab the ideas to promote welfare of their populace as well as to elevate the international image of their communities amongst various nations around the four corners of the globe.
On the other hand, loads of people are of the opinion that being free to present ideas might cause enormous issues. As a tangible example, it is plausible that prominent journalists or authors mention about top-secret facts in their articles or tomes. Consequently, it is more likely that, it provides rivals and potential enemies with an easy-access source of rare information to exploit or abuse.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on both sides, I opt vigorously to support the idea that while allocating liberty for creative artists is inevitable, the difference between apparent freedom and feeling to be free, even in the captivity should be taken into consideration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, whereas in man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62418300654 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05909061177 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653594771242 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7722426688 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.928571429 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217798737943 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660652974319 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436629385337 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111053683418 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348040750412 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.