Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Arts is a way to express and store human emotions or opinions about a certain event in history, undoubtedly vital to the society. Many claims that artists should be allowed to freely convey their thoughts as they desire and there should be no laws against it. I disagree with this belief, and my reasons will be clarified in this essay.
First and foremost, given artists complete freedom to do what they want with their works can risk a nation security. Throughout history, conflicts about religions have escalated to an unimaginable level, and there are still many followers that easily get triggered when an opinion stand oppose to their believes. Because artists can display their ideas without restriction, offensive areas in religion may agitate those followers. This results in brawls, or terrorism if the artist is a well-known figure, which endangered civilians’ safety and destroy public property.
Secondly, inappropriate contents that was under limitation or prohibition can be fully expressed in public works. Pornography, fetishes, sexism, and other sensitive contents will be expose to even children, and there is nothing the government can do because of creativity rights. Of course, there are things such as age limit, but these works will nevertheless disturb people and professional critics as a whole.
To summarize, I agree that arts is one of the most important aspect of the world, as it enrich the emotional life. But it is also the most subtle and sensitive form of expression, and without carefulness, it can be destructive and negatively affect people’s mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...d when an opinion stand oppose to their believes. Because artists can display their idea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25098039216 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82621332135 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5199735079 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305119760213 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926443492587 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835901760549 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15356830307 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936954099336 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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