Crime among teenagers is increasing day by day. What sorts of punishment would you suggest for these children?
Teen crime is perennial concern in every country because it is believed that youth is future of the nation. In the last few years, delinquent activities have risen dramatically. I agree with the notion and will dilate my suggestions in the following paragraphs.
Beyond any qualms, there are several compelling reasons why there is continuous rise in youngsters socially unacceptable behavior. Primarily, unhealthy family environment affects kids the most because children observe their elders at home, learn and follow same actions. For instance, a recent report published by UN childcare foundation reveals that amid the COVID-19 pandemic, there has been increase in teenager delinquent behavior by 30% and the main reason found behind it is dramatic increase in domestic violence. Thus, it can be clearly seen that how much adult’s behavior affects children.
Further reinforcing, there is a myriad of logical thoughts to support the same view. Teenager party is often incomplete without alcohol and drugs. If they cannot get it directly from shop or by parents then they steal it or buy it from store using fake identity or stolen parent identity. For instance, a survey done in UK by an NGO found that 45% of teenagers consume alcohol by wrong means which shows that some of them also provoke each other and support in stealing alcohol from store. The storekeepers caught them red handed by the help of CCTV cameras. Hence, parents must keep an eye on kids and their friends in order to keep them safe from these types of crimes.
Furthermore, prevention of crime is a part of life and if they caught red handed committing it then punishment is also important in order to assure that it will not happen again. There are many ways to teach and understand kids, such as communicate your concern regarding their safety, teach them anger management techniques, importance of peace, keep note whether teen is bullied in peer group and last but not the least, help them understand that each member of society is accountable for their respective behavior. So, it is necessary to counsel them, rather than give any corporal punishment.
In a nut shell, elders have to become discipline and wise if they want their kids to be disciplined and well mannered. But will parents understand the need of healthy environment around their kids or not? Still remains a question.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...uch adult’s behavior affects children. Further reinforcing, there is a myriad of logic...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03816793893 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65915117164 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605597964377 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5470522643 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.210526316 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953805697233 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238757207729 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275145140284 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451890434581 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281135820518 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...uch adult’s behavior affects children. Further reinforcing, there is a myriad of logic...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03816793893 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65915117164 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605597964377 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5470522643 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.210526316 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953805697233 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238757207729 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275145140284 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451890434581 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281135820518 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.