People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.
Crime is the major problem all over the globe among all countries trying to solve this serious issue. A bunch of people believe that penal sentences for a long time can help to reduce crime while others think that there are lots of other ways to solve this problem. I disagree with the view because there are lots of other ways to reduce crime rate like education, which would be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
Beyond any qualm, there are myriads of thoughts to support this because long prison is a good way to minimize crime rate. First and foremost, long prison supplicates fear among other criminals. In other words, if a person is already aware about the vigour of punishment before committing any crime, it will demotivate him to become a criminal. For instance, UAE has less crime rate as compared to others because their government gives life time prisonment to rapists and murderers . Hence it is important to give long prison sentence to criminal,
On the contrary, there are myriads of thoughts to support the other view. Providing employment to criminals can solve this issue in a very effective way. To add to it, employment makes them busy and they will not try to commit any offence .Furthermore, citizens will have some goals in their lives, which keeps them away from criminal activities. A recent survey in the UK that their government provides education as well as jobs to their criminals for making their career.
I opine with the view that a long prison sentence is not only the way to reduce crime rate, there are lots of other ways like education and employment to decrease crime rate.
In Conclusion, some people believe that long prison is the only way to reduce crime rate while a majority of people think that it can be reduced with the help of proper education. But how to reduce crime rate? still remains a question
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78881987578 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42038742019 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503105590062 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4888986698 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408713468877 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14933726864 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110418305167 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250557513267 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100782253187 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.