Over the past few years, it is widely acknowledged that crime has become an increasingly common practice in individuals’ lives. Consequently, people have divided opinions on whether this tremendous worldwide issue could be solved or not. Many people assume that there is nothing humans can do to protect the world from crime. Based on my observation, I disagree with this statement as a viable measure can be mentioned to approach this problem.
There is no doubt that crime is an alert concern for global citizens to be aware of. Firstly, of late, governments have discovered numerous types of crimes namely murder, sexual assault, or trafficking, which results in the widespread of inmates around the world. These crimes are the culprit of difficulty in ensuring the prevention of crimes to residents. Furthermore, whereas the rate of the poor recently is still superior to the wealthy, the vast majority of crime victims are underprivileged people due to a lack of awareness of the crime. To illustrate, most impoverished individuals are victimized and become convicts’ targets on account of their financial condition and a shortage of education, and thus, they tend to be scammed easily. Therefore, it is irrefutable that crime is a huge universal issue that is completely hard to solve.
Notwithstanding the daunting endeavor to deal with crimes, there is a feasible approach to figure out in order to eliminate this problem, which is education. Governments can establish prison education for offenders to be provided several practical skills such as vocational training centers or restorations in lieu of just a normal correctional facility. This can help perpetrators to obtain soft skills which could go a long way for them in reintegrating into society. Additionally, it is imperative that youngsters should be taught concerning regulations relating to crimes since they are more likely to be swiftly accessible to it in case of not being educated enough about it. Hence, they will tend to protect themselves from social evils and influence others to do so.
To conclude, crime has a profound impact on the world, thereby leading to some people’s views that it will never be solved. Nevertheless, this concern still can be prevented by the above solution regarding education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27247956403 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06151616525 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610354223433 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3251167794 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.823529412 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232246748826 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743820103284 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552231024126 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146983321996 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419610588858 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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