The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries.
Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions
It is undeniable that the rate of crime has been escalated dramatically between the age of thirteen to nineteen. There are various reasons behind this inevitable trend; however, certain steps can be taken to tackle this issue. This essay will be discussed the circumstances as well as remedies in further paragraphs.
There are several reasons why juvenile commits the crime. The foremost one is To justify, sheer imitation. To justify, it means television and mobile phone are the gadgets from it children starts to think about crime and how to do it. By watching inappropriate movies teenagers initiated becoming cruel and strolling expensive things as well as money from abode and schools. The other reason why they commit cruelty is that in these present days parents are more likely to concentrate on their work rather than on children. To explain, a lack of interaction would be a transformation in teenagers' minds to do crime as they spent most of the time alone.
However, this circumstances have various remedies to curb this tendency among children. Providing knowledge to teenagers in school is the best way to overcome crime rate. For instance, in one magazine there are some schools that are teaching students about laws and crime-related punishments. the subject is mainly important in their school. The other solution is parents should start developing communication and bond with their children and try to maintain an amiable behavior. To add to this, if their behavior is approachable then children will share daily happened things with their caregivers also by these guardians can supervise on them that with whom children are talking and making bonds. There should be limited time amongst children on spending time
To conclude, it is true that the crime rate is rising among teenagers. Although the reason behind it is lack of interaction from parents as well as the gadgets, there are solutions such as time restriction on gadgets, spending more time with them and keeping eye by guardians is more effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13554216867 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76450732063 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.551902097 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.294117647 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200322984552 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643707122095 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427875496674 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121523116616 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294326715615 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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