the crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. why is this happening? what can be done to reduce it?
the criminality ratio among youngster has escalated quickly in numerous countries. this essay will examine the main problem and suggest some possible solutions.
the foremost factor responsible for this is their environment. youth these days are growing differently than the older generations. some of them are spoiled, it is easy for them to get everything they want. meanwhile, the less fortunate ones, they might not capable to buy the things they want but the urge to own things successfully beaten their morality. therefore they stole it or using violence to get it.
another factor which has contributed to this maybe their criminal action was supported by their needs. as every person is unique in their own way, their needs must have been various too. for comparison to previous paragraph, wealthy people usually are well-mannered, but to be that educated, is undoubtedly tough, and many are suffering to be a perfect figure. there are some stories about privileged people breaking law just because it is comforting instead of their regular life where they have to look flawless.
there are some possible solutions to resolve this, firstly it might help if their parents teach them to think twice before they ask what they want. if parents succeeded to taught them why they can't afford it now, they have to be patient and to taught them to think is it really needed it would help children to be wiser and mature in matter of asking for something.
secondly, we live in a free country, people have the same right to do whatever they want as long as it is not harmful to others. i think to give a moral education and freedom to do the right thing will help to reduce crime rate by teenagers. we should teach them from young.
in summary, the major cause of crime rate by teenagers is their pressurized surroundings and the best measure to resolve this is to taught them the right thing to do and to be more mature in way of thinking. to conclude, that could be taken is to let them be their selves and guide them to take the right path to be better.
- people can live and work anywhere they want to choose. because of improved communication, technology and transport. do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- the crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. why is this happening? what can be done to reduce it? 67
- people can live and work anywhere they want to choose. because of improved communication, technology and transport. do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76454293629 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50449216961 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545706371191 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2298439738 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144747782085 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441430023449 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471616191128 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775397341641 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424451976327 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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