people can live and work anywhere they want to choose. because of improved communication, technology and transport. do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage?
Nowadays, people have the freedom to decide their perfect place to reside and where is their dream job. I support the idea that the positive impacts are greater than the negative effects.
The impact has not all been positive, advanced communication, technology and transport sometimes are not that convenient considering there are times a person urgently had to meet another face-to-face in order to deliver something appropriately to prevent possible problem.
on the other hand, there are several obvious benefits, such as there will be less time needed as they develop all three essentials. even the minority of times that is saved would give the user more opportunity to do something else.
speaking of opportunity, while all these vital objects evolving, at the same time, our chance to do something new, chance to be better, or maybe to explore more of things we heave already know grew simultaneously.
in conclusion, i believe the growth of communication, technology, and transport create an elevated positive impact than the negative effect as it helps in reducing time consumed and open wide more chance to exceed everything aside from its inconvenient at times.
- people can live and work anywhere they want to choose. because of improved communication, technology and transport. do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage? 56
- the crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. why is this happening? what can be done to reduce it? 67
- people can live and work anywhere they want to choose. because of improved communication, technology and transport. do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, while, in conclusion, speaking of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31746031746 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88504890438 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687830687831 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8645034549 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916946214008 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376027690646 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221420555753 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457620301906 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206960644305 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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