The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern world, with the advancement of automation, there are many ways to monitor and control our city and society. Some say that this trend leads to a drop in criminal activities other argue that it's not effective. My opinion stands closer to the premier group.
To begin with, it is mentioned that with the development of technology there are many new ways to study each person's movements and prevent some crimes, meaning that people's actions can be predicted through some algorithms. For example, banks have a coded algorithm to discover any suspicious action like being present in the area for more than a certain amount of time, this had led to decreasing in bank robberies in the past years. Moreover, the reason technology brings security is that it helps keep humans more focused and honest meaning that a well-coded software that is not compromised can not be broken into while a human can be tempted by some amount of bribe. For instance, a study showed that by adding security cameras to some factories there were fewer security guards being compromised because they knew they were being monitored.
From another perspective, machinery can help prevent some crimes by helping society move toward a more honest one. meaning that the new network of social media is a good way to cultivate people and make them acknowledge the consequences of their actions. To make it more tangible, it is seen that, in many online courts people who were honest and true we sentenced with less harsh punishment this led to the fall of dishonesty in the courts.
To sum up, the new technological lifestyle has many merits and demerits, but it seems in matters related to law not only it helps monitor and prevent criminal activities it also cultivates people to be on the right path and stopes the crime before it happens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meaning
... society move toward a more honest one. meaning that the new network of social media is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84935897436 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56036386085 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8096955194 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1069670819 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038251412321 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413465488957 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624499700349 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268154510409 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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