The use of mobile phones has increased dramatically in recent years. What are the positive and negative effects of this trend?
Compares to a decade ago, it seems like mobile phones are more common in recent years. Therefore, the beneficial and negative aspects of this development are clearer for us to see. The essay will mention both types of results of the dramatic increase in users of portable devices.
On a positive note, mobile phones can help us carry tons of files and books. While bringing a heavy bag full of papers might be inconvenient, a phone is portable and can be used in any situation. Using mobile phones also makes communications more straightforward, whether they use them for business or pleasure. Besides, these devices are fun and enjoyable to use, with games, pictures, music, and even email to text with friends in their free time. They are also personalized, expressing styles and fashion through shape, color, and different ringtones.
On the other hand, there have been several drawbacks due to the increasing cell phone usage. Firstly, spending too much time on phones can lead to several health problems, especially eye-related diseases. Some researchers have also been concerned about the connection between the radiation of cell phones and certain types of cancer. Secondly, because people can bring phones everywhere and use them anytime, they are constantly available and there might be higher expectations and demands on responding time. For example, employers’ expectations of their employees, or between parents and their children. Also, mobile phones may affect people’s social skills and manners at certain moments throughout the day. Some people’s rudeness might go alert for their latest call or message, as they chocking their phones or smacking the phones down on a platform, even worse, when they aggressively throw their phones away.
Overall, mobile phones have dramatically changed the way we live, in both negative and positive ways. It depends on users whether to use them properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30819672131 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74191293368 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.181782011 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2352941176 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267872380955 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840649867106 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594842941491 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184693538639 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459398593537 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.